託福寫作擅用名詞化小訣竅

A 謂語動詞的賓語部分。

託福寫作擅用名詞化小訣竅

原句:I do not know either what she meant or what he intends.

名詞化:I do not know either her meaning or his intentions.

B 結合被動形式

原句:If people decide without enough persuasive information,...

名詞化:If a decision is made without enough persuasive information,...

C 取代諸如從句中“the fact that”的.用法

原句:The fact that I denied what he accused me of impressed the jury.

名詞化:My denial of his accusations impressed the jury.

更好的名詞化:a. When I denied his accusations,I impressed the jury.

b. In denying his accusations, I impressed the jury.

D 名詞化部分用在there is/are的後面

原句:We demand that the government stop taxing entertainment.

名詞化:There is a demand for an end to taxation on entertainment.

原句:The floods considerably eroded the land.

名詞化:There was considerable erosion of the land from the floods.

然而,有些時候,在我們的思維方式中認爲理所應當使用“名詞化”時,老外認爲是沒有必要的。比如:

A 名詞化部分跟在動詞後面

原句(名詞化“冗餘”):The police conducted an investigation into the matter.

改後:The police investigated the matter.

B 名詞化部分作爲主語

原句:Our discussion is concerned with a tax cut.

改後:We discussed a tax cut.

C 連續進行名詞化

原句:a. First,she reviewed the evolution of the dorsal fin.

b. There was a first a review of the evolution of the dorsal fin.

改後:First,she reviewed how the dorsal fin evolved.

D 連接部分名詞化

原句:Their cessation of hostilities was because of their personnel losses.

改後:They ceased hostilities because they lost personnel.

原句:The instability of the motor housing did not preclude the completion of the field trials.

改後:Even though the motor housing was unstable, the research staff completed the field trials.