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託福寫作資料參考

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people should take different kinds of jobs before they take a career in a long term 年輕人在單一職業選擇前要從事多元職業,是否認同?

 【寫作步驟】

1. 詞彙替換:替換題目中的核心詞彙

2. 作家立場:確立主題觀點

3. 思路拓展:構思支持或者反駁的理由和例證

4. 正文寫作:按照佈局,行文展開

5. 仔細檢查:堅持文章的邏輯、詞彙、句法。

 【全文佈局】

1. 首段:背景介紹 + 爭議焦點 + 作家立場

2. 二段:第一次支持作家立場以及細節展開

3. 三段:第二次支持作家立場以及細節展開

4. 四段:第三次支持作家立場以及細節展開(或者讓步不支持觀點的合理性+ 再加以反駁)

5. 尾段:再次亮明觀點 + 總結理由

【頭腦風暴】

王小花貌美如花,李小草勤儉持家,但是,魚和熊掌不能兼得,得失得失,有得有失,所以,職業選擇我們只能依賴自我的興趣和優勢,最終單一選擇或者多元職業選擇。小鵬哥信奉的職業觀是:先就業,後擇業,如果可能,自我創業。

 【作家立場】

有人認爲單一職業選擇前應該體驗多元職業,我完全認同上面的觀點,我將通過如下的文章努力證實我的立場。

【思路拓展】

1. 我們說一個人的情商很高,是說這個人有廣泛的人脈資源,可以借勢用力,找到勤奮高效的成功方法。

2. 今天做的事情越多,未來能做的事情就更多,因爲藝多不壓身。

3. 多元職業選擇意味着豐富人生體驗和持久的新鮮感。

【範文賞析】

【首段】背景介紹 + 爭議焦點 + 作家立場

One of the characteristics of modern way of working is that people enjoy more freedom in selecting their favorite jobs. However,it often happens that people fall into a dilemma when faced with job selection. An opinion springs up that before pursuing the lifelong career, one is supposed to embark on multiple jobs. I am completely in support of the above statement and will endeavor to exemplify my opinion on this matter throughout the following essay.

【解析】

1. One of the characteristics of modern way of working is that people enjoy more freedom in selecting their favorite jobs. 現代職業選擇的特徵之一就是:人們在選擇心儀的工作的時候,享有更多的自由。

2. An opinion springs up that before pursuing the lifelong career, one is supposed to embark on multiple jobs. I am completely in support of the above statement and will endeavor to exemplify my opinion on this matter throughout the following essay. 有人認爲單一職業選擇前應該體驗多元職業,我完全認同上面的觀點,我將通過如下的文章努力證實我的立場。

【二段】第一次支持單一職業前要從事多元職業:

The most glaring benefit of taking up a rich variety of employments is that one could findd out what his or her interest really lies in and tap his or her infinite potentials by means of embarking on manifold jobs. In other words, to secure new jobs indicates one needs to constantly face up to the new career challenges, in this sense, job-transition provides job-seekers with manifold precious chances of self-improvement. Meanwhile, Job hoping means a broad range of work and life experience and constant sense of refreshment.

【解析】

1. The most glaring benefit of …… is that …… ……的最明顯的利好在於……

2. Job-transition provides job-seekers with manifold precious chances of self-improvement. 跳槽給求職者提供了多元的自我提升的機會。

3. Job hoping means a broad range of work and life experience and constant sense of refreshment. 跳槽意味着廣闊的'人生和工作的閱歷,持久的新鮮感。

【三段】第二次支持單一職業前要從事多元職業:

Another advantageous aspect stemming from multiple career option is that one could become more competitive and versatile. After all, knowledge is not a burden. More vocational skills could be acquired and the relevant working experience in different fields could be accumulated via taking different kinds of jobs. It is conceivable that a new employee has to learn from other colleagues and resolve unfamiliar crisis in order to adapt to the new working environment. His or her sociability, viability and adaptability will be quickly cultivated when braving new career challenges.

【解析】

1. Another advantageous aspect stemming from …… is that …… 另外一個來自……的優勢就在於……

2. knowledge is not a burden 藝多不壓身

3. it is conceivable that ……可以想象的是……

4. His or her sociability, viability and adaptability will be quickly fostered when braving new career challenges. 當人勇敢面對新事業挑戰的時候,其社交能力,生存能力和適應能力可以被培養。

【三段】第三次支持單一職業前要從事多元職業:

To make my final point, to take up jobs in diverse fields enables one to enlarge his or her circle of friends so that one could establish well-connected interpersonal network. Better human resources, to some extent, mean moreprecocious opportunities of job-promotion, comfortable salary and even the possibility of carving out own one career. For example,My Uncle Paul has been embarking on self-employment for more than five years, his achievement in career can be greatly attributed to his well-connected interpersonal relationship, which has been accumulated by undertaking diverse jobs.

【解析】

1. the possibility of carving out own one career v 自我創業的可能

2. His achievement in career can be greatly attributed to his well-connected interpersonal relationship, which has been accumulated by undertaking diverse jobs. 叔叔保羅創業的成功很大程度上可以被歸結爲良好的人脈資源,而這些資源都是通過多元職業而積累的。

【尾段】再次亮明作家立場:

In a nutshell, I once again re-confirm my position that multiple career choice is superior to focusing on a single career,therefore, it is wise to try different jobs before selecting a lifelong career. Although undertaking a lifelong career from the beginning of getting employed might means career stability and financial security, there exists something more significant than those so-called merits in the long run.

 【解析】

1. in a nutshell, I once again re-confirm my position that …… 總之,我再次重申我方立場……

2. Multiple career choice is superior to focusing on a single career. 多元職業優越於單一職業選擇。

3. It is wise to try different jobs before selecting a lifelong career. 選擇終生事業之前,嘗試多元職業是明智的。

【經典語料】

1. take different kinds of jobs = embark on multiple jobs v從事多樣的工作

2. take different kinds of jobs = take up a rich variety of employments v從事多樣的工作

3. take a career in a long term = focus on a single career v專注於一份事業

4. take a career in a long term = to experience job-transition = to experience the job hopping v體驗跳槽

5. in order to find out their interests and tap their infinite potentials v爲了找到興趣所在及開發無限的潛能

6. acquire more knowledge and accumulate more experience v學習更多的知識和積累更多的經驗

7. acquire more vocational skills and accumulate relevant working experience v學習多樣的職業技能和積累相關的工作經驗

8. make more new friends = enlarge one’s circle of friends v 擴大交友圈

9. sociability, viability and adaptability n社交能力,生存能力,適應能力

10. establish well-connected interpersonal network v建立起良好的人脈網絡