如何寫英文學生評語

Frank 首先祝賀你順利通過此次考試!你對自己本學期的表現滿意嗎?老師不是很滿意哦。首先是你的作業完成情況一直不是很好。要想做一名好學生,在學校要聽老師的話,在家要聽家長的話,作業一定要及時按質按量完成。由於你一開始經常不能完成作業,你的書寫還是個問題,希望你繼續努力,提升自己的書寫能力。新學期馬上就要開始了,希望你以認真的態度對待自己的學習。加油!

如何寫英文學生評語

Judy首先祝賀你順利通過此次考試!你對自己本學期的表現滿意嗎?老師不是很滿意哦。前半學期你的表現還是不錯的,上課認真聽講,作業也能及時完成。但你後半學期的表現讓老師不是很滿意。作業老是不能按質按量完成,你這次單詞鑑定就是一次教訓。冰凍三尺非一日之寒!希望你一直以飽滿的熱情投入到佳音的學習中來,我相信你一定可以做的更好!加油!

Tom首先祝賀你順利通過此次考試!你對自己本學期的表現滿意嗎?老師不是很滿意哦。你的作業完成情況一直不是很好,你這次單詞鑑定就是一次教訓。由於你一開始經常不能完成作業,你的書寫還是個問題,希望你繼續努力,提升自己的書寫能力。新學期馬上就要開始了,希望你以認真的態度對待自己的學習,老師相信你一定可以走得更遠。加油!

Kevin首先祝賀你以優異的成績通過此次考試!你對自己本學期的表現滿意嗎?老師還是比較滿意的。你平時上課回答問題積極,發音清晰,作業也能按質按量完成,但有時上課注意力不是很集中,希望你能改掉這個缺點。這次考試你總體考的很好,但還要再接再厲哦。新學期馬上就要開始了,希望你以飽滿的熱情投入到佳音的學習中來,我相信你一定可以做的更好!加油!

Jessica首先祝賀你以不錯的成績通過此次考試!你對自己本學期的表現滿意嗎?老師不是很滿意哦。前半學期你的表現非常的好,上課發言積極,發音清晰,作業也能及時完成,但後半學期你的作業完成情況不是很好,作業不能按時完成作業,錯的也沒有訂正,你這次單詞鑑定就是一次教訓。不過沒關係,新學期馬上就要開始了,希望你保持以前的飽滿熱情,積極投入到佳音的學習中來,我相信你一定可以做的更好!加油!

Alan 首先祝賀你以優異的成績通過此次考試!你對自己本學期的表現滿意嗎?老師還是比較滿意的。你平時上課回答問題較積極,作業也能按質按量完成,但有時上課注意力不是很集中,希望你能改掉這個缺點。這次考試你總體考的很好,但還要再接再厲哦。新學期馬上就要開始了,希望你以飽滿的熱情投入到佳音的學習中來,我相信你一定可以做的.更好!加油!

Lynn首先祝賀你以優異的成績通過此次考試!你對自己本學期的表現滿意嗎?老師非常滿意。你是個乖巧的好學生,上課認真聽講,發音清晰,作業也能按質按量完成。老師很高興能有你這樣的學生。這次考試你總體考的很好,但還要再接再厲哦。新學期馬上就要開始了,希望你以飽滿的熱情投入到佳音的學習中來,我相信你一定可以做的更好!加油!

James首先祝賀你以優異的成績通過此次考試!你對自己本學期的表現滿意嗎?老師還是比較滿意的。老師很高興看到後半學期你進步了很多,特別是書寫方面。這次你得了最佳書寫獎,我想這與你的努力是分不開的。這次考試你總體考的很好,但還要再接再厲哦。新學期馬上就要開始了,希望你以飽滿的熱情投入到佳音的學習中來,我相信你一定可以做的更好!加油!

Jason首先祝賀你以優異的成績通過此次考試!你對自己本學期的表現滿意嗎?老師不是很滿意哦。雖然你這次考得還不錯,但你還是要認認真真看看你的缺點在哪。上半學期你的表現非常好,上課回答問題積極,作業也能認真完成。但後半學期你上課注意力不是很集中,經常和鄰座產生摩擦,希望你能好好解決這個問題。新學期馬上就要開始了,希望你以更加飽滿的熱情投入到佳音的學習中來,我相信你一定可以做的更好!加油!

Daniel首先祝賀你以不錯的成績通過此次考試!你對自己本學期的表現滿意嗎?老師不是很滿意哦。雖然你這次考得還不差,但你還是要認認真真看看你的缺點在哪。你平時上課積極回答問題,但上課注意力不集中,有時還會和鄰座產生摩擦,書寫也還是個問題,希望你能解決這些問題。新學期馬上就要開始了,希望你以更加飽滿的熱情投入到佳音的學習中來,我相信你一定可以做的更好!加油!

Danny首先祝賀你順利通過此次考試!你對自己本學期的表現滿意嗎?老師還是比較滿意的。你平時回答較積極,作業也能認真,從你這次的單詞鑑定中老師可以看出你付出了努力。我們再來看一下你的筆試和口試,很遺憾,都沒有及格。不過沒關係,我相信通過我們共同的努力,我們一定可以克服困難,取得更好的成績,一定要有信心哦!加油!

Kitty首先祝賀你順利通過此次考試!你對自己本學期的表現滿意嗎?老師不是很滿意哦。前半學期你表現的非常好。上課發言積極,發音清晰,作業也能按質按量完成。但後半學期,作業完成情況不是很好,上課回答問題也磕磕跘跘,導致這次口語考的很不理想。希望這能引起的重視。新學期馬上就要開始了,希望你以更加飽滿的熱情投入到佳音的學習中來,我相信你一定可以做的更好!加油!

Rob首先祝賀你以優異的成績通過此次考試!你對自己本學期的表現滿意嗎?老師很滿意哦。你是個乖巧的好學生,上課認真聽講,發音清晰,作業也能按質按量完成。老師很高興能有你這樣的學生。這次考試你總體考的很好,但還要再接再厲哦。新學期馬上就要開始了,希望你以飽滿的熱情投入到佳音的學習中來,我相信你一定可以做的更好!加油!

Gary首先祝賀你以優異的成績通過此次考試!你對自己本學期的表現滿意嗎?老師很滿意哦。你是個乖巧的好學生,上課認真聽講,發音清晰,作業也能按質按量完成。老師很高興能有你這樣的學生。這次筆試和口試都考了100,我想這是你平時努力的結果吧。新學期馬上就要開始了,希望你以飽滿的熱情投入到佳音的學習中來,我相信你一定可以走得更遠!加油!

Linda首先祝賀你以優異的成績通過此次考試!你對自己本學期的表現滿意嗎?老師還是比較滿意的。你平時上課回答問題積極,發音清晰,但後半學期作業完成得不是很理想,錯的地方也沒有訂正,希望你能及時改掉這個缺點。新學期馬上就要開始了,希望你以更加飽滿的熱情投入到佳音的學習中來,我相信你一定可以走得更遠!加油!

如何寫英文學生評語 [篇2]

學生英文評語(一)

yinuo

yinuo is an absolute pleasure to teach. her english is very advanced but she seems to enjoy learning the new things that we are teaching in class and she is always full of confidence which is great! i’m looking forward to getting to know her more.

mia

mia is a good step ahead of the rest of the class when it comes to saying sentences and vocabulary however she is always experimenting with new ways to say things and still loves to learn the things i’m teaching. she is super

oscar

oscar is a really great little boy who is always happy to learn and loves to participate. he understands a lot of what is going on in class and his pronunciation and confidence are improving all the time. keep up the great work!

cici

cici is still doing really well in my classes. she seems to enjoy classes a lot and loves to learn new things but please keep practicing at home to build up some more confidence. otherwise i am very pleased with her progress.

sissy

sissy is very confident in class when she understands what is going on but she is very quiet when we are learning new topics. she is doing great in class and her pronunciation is very good so keep practicing to build up that confidence that i know she has.

lily

lily is a very bright girl but she is very easily distracted in class and therefore is struggling to remember a lot of vocabulary. keep practicing at home so she can build up more confidence and get more involved in class.

annie

annie is still very quiet in class. she listens well to what is going on but she doesn’t always participate in activities. please keep practicing at home with her to build up more confidence with speaking and keep up the super work!

jerry

jerry is still as smart as ever. he really loves to learn and he is very well behaved in class. he speaks clearly and listens intently all the time. his progress is going very well and i’m still very happy with his development.

lucy

lucy is still doing really great at remembering new vocabulary and she is very active in class. her sentences are going really well but keep practicing at home to build up more speaking confidence. i am really pleased with her.

ivy

ivy is such a wonderful little girl. she is so well behaved and loves to learn all the time. her pronunciation is very clear and she always remembers new vocabulary. i’m so happy to teach her and very pleased with her progress.

mia

mia is still wonderful as ever. her pronunciation really is outstanding. she speaks so clearly and she has such confidence with speaking when she wants to. she really is progressing so well and i’m so happy to have her in my class.

sophia

sophia is always improving in my classes. she is always keen to learn and picks things up really well. she participates every day and listens really intently in class. i am so proud of all her progress since we first met.

yana

yana has been really good the past few weeks. she is picking up more sentences as the weeks go on but please keep practicing them at home so she can build up more confidence. i am really pleased with all her progress.

amanda

amanda is such a bright little girl with huge learning potential. she is participating really well in all my classes and she seems to be getting along really well with the other children too. i can’t wait to see what else she has to offer.

jake

jake is still doing really great in english class. he is always happy to learn and his confidence is building all the time. he can sometimes be easily distracted but he’s a smart boy and always picks things up quickly!

jason

jason is still as smart as ever. he really loves to learn and he is very well behaved in class. he speaks clearly and listens intently all the time. his progress is going very well and i’m still very happy with his development.

stephen

stephen is constantly improving in my class. his vocabulary has expanded a great deal since we first met and i am so pleased with all of his progress. (#url#)he is always happy to learn and participate and i am so proud of him.

學生英文評語(二)

peter

peter is a bright little boy with a lot of potential for learning but he struggles to remember a lot of vocabulary still. this will come with time and practice so keep practicing at home. other than that he is really doing super and i am very proud.

carey

carey is doing great this week. she can still sometimes be easily distracted in class however she is picking things up really well recently. i am very happy with her progress so far and i hope she keeps up the good work!

dea

dea is very good at learning new things. she listens and participates well in class and she picks things up very quickly. her sentences are improving and i am really pleased with all her progress. keep up the super work.

charles

the past couple of weeks charles has been doing so well. he is still very easily side-tracked however his progress is developing all the time. he has been speaking english a lot more in class recently and loves to join in with all the games and activities.

yoyo

yoyo is doing great as always. she is very confident during group activities but when it comes to speaking on her own she gets very shy sometimes. keep practicing at home to work on this confidence and keep up the superb work!

colin

colin is doing wonderful as always. he is so well behaved in class and loves to learn new things and speak english. i’ve noticed huge improvements with him and he’s developing at such a good pace. i’m so pleased with his progress.

jerry

jerry is improving all the time but his confidence has dwindled since i last saw him so please keep practicing new words and sentences at home. he is a very bright boy and i am really pleased with his progress.

jodie

jodie is a very bright girl but she is very easily distracted in class and therefore is struggling to remember a lot of vocabulary. keep practicing at home so she can build up more confidence and get more involved in class.

maggie

maggie is very good at learning new things. she listens and participates well in class and she picks things up very quickly. her sentences are improving and i am really pleased with all her progress. keep up the super work.

oliver

oliver is a good step ahead of the rest of the class when it comes to saying sentences and vocabulary however he is always experimenting with new ways to say things and still loves to learn the things i’m teaching. he is super.

mickey

mickey is such a smart boy who is a very good learner. he still loves to participate and answer questions. he is happy to be in class and speaks very confidently. i am very happy with all his development over the past few months!

sheryl

sheryl is still a pleasure as ever. she is getting more and more confident with sentences these past few weeks and she is really trying to put things together herself. she’s doing great and i am really happy with her.

jake

jake is really doing absolutely fantastic in class. he completely understands what is going on in class and he seems to enjoy class so much more. he participates in everything and loves to help out the other children with their sentences. i am so impressed.

daniel

daniel is still ma-ki-ng improvements every week. he still has a lot of catching up to do and he still has to work on his sentences but he is definitely getting better all the time. keep practicing and keep up the super work.

jill

jill is doing fantastic the past few weeks. she seems to have a much better understanding of what is going on in class and because of this reason she is starting to participate much better and pay attention more.

myron

myron is such a bright little boy with huge potential for learning. he is saying sentences with such ease and his pronunciation is excellent. he is gaining confidence every week and i am so happy with him.

tony

tony is superb as always. he is still very well behaved in class and therefore learns new language very quickly. he is great at remembering vocabulary and he is putting good sentences together. he’s doing great.

allan

allan has been doing great again this week. he picks things up quickly but tends to forget them easily so please keep practicing at home. he is participating well and his sentences are improving all the time.

tom

tom is really great at participating in activities that i am leading, he can repeat after me extremely well and he loves to learn new things. he still has some catching up to do so keep practicing at home but i am really happy with him.

lisa

lisa is still ma-ki-ng huge improvements all the time. she is getting much better at listening and her pronunciation is constantly improving. i am really pleased with all the progress she has made and i am so proud of her.

robbie

robbie is a really confident bright little boy with huge potential. he has good pronunciation and he is very well-behaved in class. his listening is really improving and i am so pleased with all his progress.

dudu

dudu has made massive improvements recently. he is listening very well in class and therefore is learning so much more vocabulary. he is very well behaved and participating really well in class. i am so pleased with him.

thomas

thomas is ma-ki-ng really good progress recently. he still struggles with new vocabulary so keep practicing at home but he has become much more social in class and enjoys participating a lot more now. keep up the good work!

yvonne

yvonne is still an absolute pleasure to teach. she is improving all the time and she speaks very clearly, she also loves to participate. this week she has been doing really great at saying new sentences and i’m very pleased.

david

david is doing really well in class the past week. he is ma-ki-ng improvements all the time and slowly building up more confidence. his sentences need some work so please keep practicing but other than that i am really pleased.

christina

christina is starting to say more sentences and is starting to get a better understanding of what’s going on in class recently. i am really pleased with all her efforts. she is listening more and i am really happy.

jason

jason is ma-ki-ng developments every week but he is still easily distracted and not confident with his speaking. he will grow out of this soon but in the meantime please keep practicing at home with him.

wendy

wendy is a very bright girl as always who really has great learning potential. she learns things very easily and is always happy to participate. her sentences are getting better all the time and i am really pleased with her.

hardy

hardy is such a bright little boy who is doing fantastic as always. he is great at ma-ki-ng up his own sentences and he is always happy to learn new things. i am so proud of all his hard work in class. keep it up!

學生英文評語(三)

amanda

amanda has been going well, she is saying the words. but after a little bit of encouragement, she is becoming a little bit more confident with her speaking out loud in class. keep practicing sentences at home.

colin

colin is going well; he is active and answers all the questions i am asking from him. he is very eager to get up in front of the class and do the action or find the new pictures and say the word.

ivy

ivy is participating very well in the class, she always likes to say the new words or sentences that we have just learnt. when asked a question; she thinks very hard and comes up with some great unique ways of saying the sentence.

mia

mia is a very bright little girl, her vocabulary is very good. she always comes up with different sentences when i ask her a question; she is very active in the class which is very good.

jason

jason is taking part in the class, he is still a little shy. but when asked a question he usually has no trouble answering it. when it is his turn to come up in front of the class, he is a little bit tentative. but eventually comes up.

oliver

oliver is a very bright boy who is always participating in the class. when i ask him a question he does not hesitate and always gives me a different answer which is fantastic. he understands everything that is going on in class.

cici

cici is still ma-ki-ng improvements all the time. she is getting more confident with the more vocabulary she is remembering. she is slowly getting more and more active in class, which is really great.

yana

yana has missed a few classes this week but other than that she is remembering vocabulary much better and participating really well; she is still a little bit shy in class. but over time she will be much more vocal.

jerry

jerry is going well even though he has missed a few classes; he is remembering vocabulary really well and he is starting to use it more often. he is still very quiet but he is ma-ki-ng super progress all the time. i am really pleased.

yoyo

yoyo is getting along really well in class. she is always keen to participate and shows great potential for learning. her sentences are improving all the time and she is coming up with some very unique answers to my questions.

lucy

lucy is becoming really involved in lessons and she is remembering a lot of vocabulary and starting to use it frequently, she is always putting her hand up to come up in front of the class i am really impressed with her and i hope she keeps it up!

jake

king is going well, he is very active in class and is always putting his hand up to come up and do the action or say the sentence. his vocabulary is continuing to improve which is very good.

dea

dea is going well in class, she has opened up a lot since the first class we had. she is saying the new words and sentences really well and is coming up in front of the class to practice what she has just leant.

annie

annie is coming along in leaps and bounds, she is really starting to understand the new words and sentences. she is becoming more aware of what is going on in class and her listening skills are getting much better.

lily

lily is still a little bit quiet and shy, but she is saying the new words and sentences. she is becoming more active during the class, and i can see that in know time she will be very active in the class.

stephen

stephen is going well in class, he was very shy to begin with. but he has now opened up a little bit and is saying the new words and sentences. he is becoming active in the class which is really good.

yinuo

yinuo is a very bright and smart little girl, her english knowledge is fantastic. she is very active in class and really enjoys getting up in front of the class and practicing the new words and sentences. she has a great grasp on the lessons and understands everything we are doing.

mia

amy is going well; she has started to become more active in the class, which is really great to see. she is saying the new words and sentences well; is getting more active in class.

sophia

sophia is going really well, she is very active during class and has a good understanding of what is going on during the class. she enjoys getting up in front of the class and practicing the new words and sentences.

sissy

sissy has opened up more in class; in the beginning she was a little bit shy. but now she is saying the new words and sentences rally well. she is getting more active which is really good to see.

oscar

oscar is a very bright little boy, he has a great grasp on the class and understands everything that is going on. he is very active in the class and is one of the first students to put his hand up and practice the new words and sentences.

jodie

jodie is going really well in class, she is participating in almost every activity and is very active. she enjoys getting up in front of the class and practicing what she has just learnt.

charles

charles is active during class and has a good understanding of what is going on in the class. he will get up and say the new words and sentences.

carrie

carrie is a smart little girl, she has a good understanding of english and is really starting to participate in the class well. she now enjoys getting up in front of the class and practicing the new words.

maggie

maggie is going well in class, she has opened up a lot since the first class we had. she is saying the new words and sentences really well and is coming up in front of the class to practice what she has just leant.

學生英文評語(四)

mia

mia is really beginning to understand a lot more that is going on in class. she is starting to get used to putting sentences together and she is saying things more clearly. keep revising at home and keep it up!

colin

colin understands a lot more of what is going on in class recently and he has started asking a lot more questions which is great. he still forgets some vocabulary but overall he is doing superb and i am really happy.

ivy

ivy is still a delight to teach but recently she has been very easily distracted in class and forgetting a lot of vocabulary. she is still doing superb at answering questions and still enjoys being in class a lot. keep up the good work.

mia

mia is always doing fantastic in my class as you already know. this week has been no different. she’s really doing great at trying to put new sentences together by herself and i am really pleased with all her efforts.

yana

yana is still progressing all the time. she has super pronunciation and understanding, she always knows what’s going on in class and she loves to participate. i am proud as ever of her hard work and achievements.

jason

jason is doing great in class as always. he is a very bright little boy and he is doing really well with his sentences. sometimes he forgets some vocabulary so keep practicing but apart from that he’s great.

jake

eason is a great little boy with a huge potential for learning. he participates really well in class, he remembers vocabulary, and he is always eager to learn. keep practicing at home to keep his confidence up!

oliver

oliver is doing superb as usual. he enjoys doing new things and enjoys learning a lot. i am always very pleased with his progress. his sentences are improving nicely and he’s ma-ki-ng good progress as always.

jodie

jodie is still a wonderful little girl to have in my class. once she has something in her head that she knows and understands she repeats it constantly in class. this is good but keep practicing at home so she can branch out a little.

cici

cici makes huge improvements all the time but she is painfully shy when she speaks to me sometimes. her english speaking is going great and her sentences are improving well so keep practicing to build up confidence.

amanda

amanda is a delightful little girl to teach but she forgets a lot of vocabulary regularly. this will improve if you keep practicing at home. other than that she is participating really well and she is improving all the time.

jerry

jerry is still a very quiet boy in my classes but he is improving all the time. he is remembering more vocabulary and because of this he is getting more confident with his speaking. he is doing really well.

yoyo

yoyo is such a bright little girl with a great ability to learn. she is always happy to participate and her sentences are improving all the time. i am really happy with her progress and efforts in class so keep up the super work.

lucy

lucy makes improvements in class all the time. she’s happy to learn new things and her pronunciation is always improving. i am really pleased with the developments she’s ma-ki-ng in class and with her sentences.

jerry

jerry is still doing great in class but lacks confidence with his speaking. when he says a sentence he only says half of it then mumbles the rest as he is unsure how to go on. he’s doing superb but keep practicing to build up confidence.

dea

dea is a very bright girl with great pronunciation. she is remembering much more vocabulary but she is not completely confident with her sentences yet. keep practicing saying random si-mp-le sentences at home to build up confidence.

annie

anne has great potential for learning but she has no confidence in class. she is still very quiet and doesn’t always pay attention or take part. please keep practicing words and si-mp-le sentences at home to build up confidence.

lily

lily has been the same as ever the past couple of weeks. she struggles to take part and pay attention in class. she is a very bright girl with a lot of potential but still has a lot of catching up to do. please keep practicing and keep up the good work.

stephen

stephen has really made massive improvements since i first met him. he is much more attentive in class and his listening skills have really improved. he recognizes a lot more vocabulary and he is getting more confident as the weeks go on.

yinuo

yinuo is doing superb again this week. she always understands what is going on and she is constantly trying out new sentences and ways to say thing. she is a very bright girl and i am very happy to have her in my class.

charles

charles is doing really great again this week. he is happy to learn new things and always participates really well in class. he is saying sentences very well and his confidence with speaking is building all the time.

sophia

sophia has been really ma-ki-ng an effort to put new sentences of her own together this week and i am really pleased with that. this means she is understanding a lot and starting to think outside the box. keep up the great work.

sissy

sissy is starting to say more sentences of her own recently and is becoming slightly more confident with this weeks topic. she is always happy to learn new things and she is a very bright girl. keep up the good work.

oscar

oscar is doing great again this week. he is very confident with his speaking recently and he learns very quickly. i am really happy with his progress and i hope he continues to keep up the excellent work.

如何寫英文學生評語 [篇3]

Tony – Tony is going really well; he is saying the new words and is trying very hard with the new sentences。 He really enjoys coming up to the front of the class and performing the actions that go along with the songs, he is trying really hard to remember the new words and sentences。

Alan – Alan is going really well in the class; he sits in his chair and waits for his turn。 He is doing a great job with remembering the new words; he is always trying his best with everything that he does。 He enjoys singing the new songs。

Frank – Frank is going great; he is feeling much better and is really trying very hard with the new words。 He is slowly catching up with the other children, I am sure he will be able to say all the new words and sentences。 He is very active in the class and is trying to talk more。 Lewis - Lewis is going really well in class; he has a good understanding of what we are doing。 He participates well in every

activity and really tries very hard with everything that he is doing。 Lewis enjoys coming to the front of the class and performing the action that go along with the songs。

Jessie – Jessie is having a great time in the class; he seems to understand what we are doing and has no trouble repeating the words。 He really enjoys doing the actions and singing the songs, he is always happy to come to the front of class and practice the new words。

David – David is going well; he is slowly coming to the front of the class to practice what we are learning。 He is trying hard with the new words and sentences; he really enjoys singing the new songs and performing the actions that go along with them。

Michael - Michael is going really well in class; he is very active in class and is having no trouble with the new words and sentences。 He really participates well in all the activities and tries his best with

everything that he does。 He is slowly enjoying the songs, and I am sure that before too long he will really like singing。

Joyce – Joyce is going great in the class; she is always trying her best with the new words and sentences。 Sometimes she says the new words only after hearing them once, which is fantastic。 She likes playing games with me and is always happy and smiling in the class。 Cindy – Cindy has been away from class

Tomi – Tomi is going really well in class; he is having no trouble with the new words and sentences。 He is participating well in all class activities; he really enjoys singing the new songs。 When it is his turn to come to the front of the class to practice the new words he is very happy。

如何寫英文學生評語 [篇4]

現在,學生英語寫作水平的高低是對學生英語綜合運用能力的評價指標之一,這已經受到了英語老師的普通重視,在作文教學中教師們可謂“八仙過海,各顯其能”,但在對學生作文進行評價時,多數教師只是給學生一個分數或等級,很少能像中文教師那樣,在學生的作文後寫上自己對學生作文比較具體和明確的看法或意見的。其實,教師的評語是對學生英語書面表達能力和自主學習情況的評價和指導。我在作文評改中借鑑中文教師的做法,用英語寫評語,讓學生在真實的英語交際環境中,書面語能力也能得到提高。實際上,教師爲學生的英語作文寫評語,不僅有利於提高學生的英語書面交際能力,而且有利於促進師生的知識,思想和情感交流,還有利於提高學生自主學習的積極性,下面,筆者就如何寫英語評語談一點看法和體會。

1、適時恰當地評價

老師應及時地批改作文,及時瞭解學生的學習進步狀況和學習效果,以便掌握情況,進行指導。有些學生在作文中寫到了一些自己遇到的特殊的問題和想法,他們盼望老師的評價和指導,所以教師應急學生之所急,及時地給予恰當的評價。教師在寫評語時使用的詞彙和語法知識不能過高或過低於學生的現有水平,最好能及時地應用學生新近學到的詞彙和語法,這樣有助於學生對新知識加深理解和強化記憶,也可讓學生看到知識如何在實踐中運用。當然評語中偶爾也可以有幾個生詞,有時候學生通過上下文就能理解,有時學生查字典來解決,這樣做也利於學生的猜詞能力的提高和擴大詞彙量,有時適當地用英語習語或諺語寫評語,使學生更多地感悟英語的簡潔和優美。

(1)Do in Rome as the Romans do

(2)Actions speak louder than words

(3)Go helps those who help themselves

(4)It is the first step that costs

(5)Always put yourself in others’ shoes

2、多加鼓勵,增加學生英語學習自信心

“自信是成功的第一祕訣”,愛迪生曾說過“相信自己能的人就會贏”,無論對什麼樣的學生,老師都要讓他樹立一個信念“我能行”!因此,當老師在學生的作文中看到運用得好的詞彙句型,表達了不同的觀點,或文章充滿了想象力和幽默感等一切“閃光點”時,應不失時機地給予表揚或鼓勵的評語,這樣每個學生都會有成就感,而成就動機能夠很好地激發人的學習動機。

Well, your handwriting is very good.

Great! I appreciate what you’ve done for your class.

You’re a good student with sense of responsibility.

I marvel at the maturity of such a young child as you.

You’ve made fabulous progress, and I’m sure you’ll succeed.

3、以情動人

作文不僅僅是師生間教學信息的互相反饋,而且是聯繫和溝通師生情感的橋樑。從作文中,細心的教師能覺察到學生的思想和情感的變化,同樣,從教師的評語中學生能領悟到教師對學生是否真誠、有信心和有責任心,教師對學生的努力一定要有切合實際的鼓勵;對他們取得的成績、進步,要在評語中表現出發自內心的讚賞和喜悅;對學生作文中的錯誤和思想情緒的變化一定要誠心誠意地以恰當的方式指出;對一些成績落後的學生要有同情心和責任心。讚揚要恰如其分,批評要適當委婉,重在鼓勵,教師應以平等的態度與學生開展評論性的討論,營造一種平等、自由的學術氣氛,讓學生與教師能在作文和評語中自由的交流思想,讓學生擁有創造性地運用所學知識的機會和自由。 As fire tries gold, so does adversity try courage. Nobody knows what he can do till he has tried. You’ve made a good start.

A good beginning is half the way of success.

Time waits for no man. Nothing is more precious than time, do you agree with me? Not only energy, but also persistence is necessary to success, do you think so?

No pains, no gains.

有道是“精成所至,金石爲開”,教師的熱情和真誠必然會在一定程度上引起學生的思想轉折和學習成績的飛躍,現在學生們很樂意把自己的思想動態和情感變化寫在作文中,並急切盼望看到我給他們的評語,並對我的評語做出迴應。曾有位學生回覆說我就像他的媽媽一樣關心他,我們都非常珍視這種師生間真誠的交流。

4、因材施教,授人以漁

在寫評語時,除了幫助學生提高文化知識外,還要承認學生個體之間學習能力,掌握知識程度的差別,應因材施教,授人以漁。對於一些成績落後的學生要保護他們的自尊心,幫助他們樹立自信心,讓他們也能得到繼續發展。在批改他們的作文時,溫和地指出錯誤的同時,指出他們的優點,以資鼓勵。

I’m glad to know that you want to learn English well, I’d be glad to help you.

Nothing is difficult for us to learn if you want to learn.

It’s not helps but obstacles that make a man.

Where there’s a will, there is a will.

If the facts had been in a good order, the article would have been cleaner.

Your essay shows you have real ability in English, and you are developing, increasingly depth of thought and clarity of expression in your written work. But there are some grammar mistakes in it.

當然,在寫英語作文評語的過程中,教師不僅需要不斷提高自己的英語書面表達能力,更重要的是要深入研究學生的心理特點、思想情緒、個人愛好、學習習慣,以及英語程度等等,以便言之有物,以理服人,因材施教。總之,給學生寫評語既是一件艱苦的事,又是一門學問,寫得好會給學生培養和提高書面交際能力帶來很大的幫助,其作用不可低估。