1 It is hard to imagine a student focusing their energy on textbook while other children are playing. 當別的孩子在玩耍的時候，很難想象一個學生能集中精力在課本上。
2 Moreover, children will have less time to play and communicate with their peers due to extra studies, consequently, it is difficult to develop and cultivate their character and interpersonal skills. They may become more solitary and even suffer from certain mental illness. 而且，由於要額外地學習，孩子們沒有多少時間和同齡的孩子玩耍和交流，很難培養他們的個性和交際能力。他們可能變得孤僻甚至產生某些心理疾病。
3From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that, although extra studies indeed enjoy many obvious advantages, its disadvantages shouldnt be ignored and far outweigh its advantages. It is absurd to force children to take extra studies after school. 通過以上討論，我們可以得出結論：儘管額外學習的確有很多優點，但它的缺點不可忽視，且遠大於它的優點。因此，放學後強迫孩子額外學習是不明智的.。
4 Any parents should place considerable emphasis on their children to keep the balance between play and study. As an old saying goes: All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. 任何家長都應非常重視保持孩子在學習與玩耍的平衡，正如那句老話：只工作，不玩耍，聰明的孩子會變傻。
