關於建議信的英語作文

篇一:高中英語作文--建議信

關於建議信的英語作文

請你代表你班同學給校長寫一封信,反映一下你校食堂的幾點問題,以引起學校重視,並針對問題提出兩條合理建議。問題包括:

1. 菜價昂貴,菜市單一;2. 排隊時間長,浪費午休時間;3. 味道不佳,浪費現象嚴重。

注意:1. 詞數不少於120; 2. 開頭和結尾已給出,不計入總詞數;3. 可適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。 參考詞彙: 食堂 canteen Dear Principal,

Recently, many students are discussing the problems of the canteen. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I sincerely hope you can adopt my suggestions. Thank you!

Yours, Li Hua

作文範文: Dear Principal,

Some students think the prices of the dishes are too high and that the choices are too limited. Another concern is that the time spent in waiting is so long that we have less time to have a rest. Meanwhile, some students think that the taste of the food is awful, which leads to a lot of waste. the prices be more reasonable and the choices of dishes be more various.需注意的詞彙、表達:

1. delicious waiting taste(n.味道) tasty (adj.可口的) cook (n.廚師) cooker (n.炊具)

price 價格

2. lower /bring down the price 降低價格 3. at a lower/reasonable price 以較低的價格 4. varieties of dishes 種類多樣的菜品 5. For one thing,……. For another,……

6. make sb (not)do sth

7. wait /stand in line / in a queue for a long time 8. The kinds of food are . 表達食堂出現的問題:

9. The prices of dishes are so high that many of us can’t afford them.

10. There are so few dishes to choose from, which is far from satisfactory. / which can’t satisfy our

needs.

11. It takes us so much time to stand in line, which decreases our time of rest at noon. 12. The food in the canteen doesn’t taste .

The taste of food in the canteen isn’t

13. The food in the canteen tastes so bad that a lot of food is left and wasted 14. It’s a waste of time to stand in line for a long time.

15. The food in the canteen tastes so bad, which leads to a severe phenomenon of wasting food. 16. In the long run, it’s bad for our health and study.

17. It goes without saying that it will influence our sleep in the afternoon. 表達提出的建議:

18. Improving the taste of the food is also a good solution to the problems. 19. I think it’s necessary to provide more kinds of food. 20. It’s high time that we took measures to solve the problems.

So it’s high time for us to take measures

21. To solve the problems, I think the canteen should set up a new figure(形象) and improve the

present condition to satisfy the students’ needs.

22. We hope the canteen can provide us with dishes of a high quality at a reasonable price. 23. The canteen should open more windows so that we needn’t wait so long.

24. As far as I’m concerned, the canteen should attach importance to the quality. What’s more,

different kinds of food should be provided.

25. Measures are supposed to be taken to improve the conditions of the canteen.

建議模板: Dear ….,

I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to…….(引出話題). Here are a few suggestions. First of all, it is important to do sth. Then, it also helps to do sth. Besides, it should be a good idea to do sth.

建議句型積累:

1. Many ways can contribute to solving the problem, but I think the following may be the most

effective ones.

2. I’d like to make some suggestions on ……. 3. It’s of great importance for sb to do sth.

It’s necessary for sb to do sth

4. It would be a good idea for sb to do sth. / It would be a better idea if……. 5. It contributes /helps a lot if ……… 6. I suggest that …../ My suggestion is that …

It’s suggested / advised / recommended that…… 7. You’d better do sth./ We’d better do sth

It’s better to do sth

8. Measures are supposed to be taken to do sth

We are supposed to take effective measures to do sth 9. It’s high time that sb sth. / It’s high time for sb to do sth

篇二:高中英語建議信作文

Dear Peter, Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you'll be able to learn from the teachers and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers, and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you'll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. In addition, You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.

Try writing to me in Chinese next time.

寫作注意問題

一是單詞拼寫要正確,大小寫等。開頭結尾部分的語法要正確。 ? 二是選擇多種表達方式,例如給出的不同的提建議的句式。 ? 三是結構要清晰,三段式,有過渡詞。

四是卷面要整潔。

五是字數要夠,答題卡上劃得橫線部分儘量寫滿,最多剩一行

篇三:高中英語作文 建議信(如何學英語)

假如你是李華,你剛收到了你的'朋友王梅的電子郵件,她在郵件裏向你詢問在高中如何學好英語。請你根據下列的內容給她寫封回信。

1. 上課認真聽講,做好筆記,課後及時複習;

2. 詞彙是基礎,每天早上花半個小時的時間背誦單詞,朗讀課文;

3. 課外多與同學用英語交流,提高聽力和口語能力;

4. 每天堅持寫日記。

注意:1.詞數120—150詞左右,短文的開頭和結尾已爲你寫好,不計入總數;

2.內容可適當發揮,注意行文連貫。

Dear Wang Mei,

I’m very glad to have received your e-mail.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

Dear Wang Mei,

I’m very glad to have received your I’m writing to give you some advice on how to learn English well in high school. First of all,you should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in class so that 衆所周知),vocabulary is of great importance / should spend half an hour in the morning reciting words and reading texts ’s more,try to your classmates in English out of this way you can improve your listening and spoken English but not least,you should keeping a diary,which helps improve your written English and helps you go over/review the words and expressions that you have learnt.

I hope these suggestions will be of use to mber:where there is a will,there is a way. 有志者事竟成 /The man who has made up his mind to win will never say “impossible”. 一個決心要成功的人是從來不會說“不可能的”。

Best wishes!

Yours, Li Hua

篇四:高中英語建議信和倡議書作文精心整理

How to write a letter for advice

⑴ 說明建議的內容;

⑵ 提出具體建議的原因;

⑶ 指出採納建議的益處。

注意事項:語言要委婉、禮貌,顧及對方感受。

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a letter. Suppose you are Zhang Ying. Write a letter to Xiao Wang, a schoolmate of yours who is going to visit you during the summer holiday for a week. You should write at least 100 words according to the suggestions given below in Chinese.

1、表示歡迎。 2、提出對度假安排的建議。 3、祝願

Dear Xiao Wang,

coming to Beijing to join me in the summer holiday. 第一段表示歡迎 If you can stay in Beijing only for a week, 表明建議的原因 語氣親切,符合說話人身份關係 for visiting a number of places of historic interest. 敘述詞和副詞一目瞭然 places that you have the greatest interest in, such as

the Palace Museum, the Summer Place, the Great then使文章結構緊湊

will make you have enough time to appreciate(欣賞) 使自己的安排具有說服力 what you really want to see.

traveler, it is necessary for you to read some 建議有理有據 books about these places before you come to see

them with your own eyes. With more knowledge

about these places, you will have a better

understanding of Chinese history and culture.

I am eager to meet you soon in Beijing. 表達良好的祝願,符合文體要求

假如你叫孫軍,是恩施高中的學生,要給市長寫一封信,反映學校門前交通擁擠現象,包括以下要點:

參考詞彙: 穿行 thread one’s way 天橋 overpass

範文1

Dear Mayor,

I’m a student of No.1 Middle School. Here I have something to tell you.

Next to a primary school stands our school, facing a main street. When it comes to traffic jams, it’s crammed with cars during the rush hour. What makes things worse is that children have to be picked up by their parents owing to their young age. As a consequence, ①it’s of great danger/②it’s extremely dangerous for the students to go through the traffic. According to the phenomenon stated above, it is high time that relevant authorities took some measures like building an overpass.

I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Sun Jun

範文2

Dear Mayor,

I’m a student of No.1 Middle School. Here I have something to tell you.

①Bordering a primary school,/②Located next to a primary school, my school faces the main road directly, which always has a traffic jam at the peak time of the whole day. ①Additionally/②In addition, many parents send their young children to school and fetch them home,① thus making the traffic heavier./②thus causing more serious traffic jams./③thus resulting in more serious traffic jams. There is no denying that we students, threading our way through masses of cars, are exposed to great danger. ①Seeing these matters, never will I stop urging our government to take some measures. For the sake of improving the quality of traffic, it is significant to build an overpass./②In order to release the stress of traffic problems, I strongly suggest that relevant authorities should take active/effective measures like building an overpass./③From my point of view,/As far as I’m concerned,/In my opinion, some measures are supposed to be taken by government as soon as possible such as building an overpass to improve the conditions of the traffic./④Aimed at solving these problems, the government should take some measures immediately, such as building an overpass ahead of our school.

I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Sun Jun

例1廣州某電視臺打算開辦一個面向中學生觀衆的英語節目, 新聘任了來自英國的John作爲節目編輯助理。現在, John就節目內容向廣大中學生徵求意見。假如你是學生李華, 建議開辦“廣州全接觸” (All-round Guangzhou)節目。請根據以下節目設想給John寫信:

Dear John,

I know you’re going to set up an English program for middle school students. So I’m writing to suggest a program — “All-round Guangzhou”. This program will cover topics like the history, education, famous scenic spots, food and famous people of Guangzhou. It would be better to broadcast it on weekends so that we students can have the chance to watch it.

Besides, you can also invite some middle school students to get involved in the program, which will surely arouse other students’ interest in it. Not only will this program help students improve their English, but also get them to know more about the culture of Guangzhou so as to introduce Guangzhou to foreign visitors. I am sure it will be well-received by the middle school students. I hope you can take my suggestion into consideration.

Sincerely yours, Li Hua

例2 假設你是小明的好朋友李華,小明參加了一個英語演講比賽,他對比賽非常擔心,向你求助,請你根據以下內容給他寫一封建議信。

[精華點評]

建議信的寫作關鍵在於作者給出建議的語氣委婉而中肯, 使對方容易接受。很多考生習慣使用祈使句或者You should的句型表示建議, 這樣比較生硬,因此考生轉換不同的句型使語言豐富, 如範文中使用了you should..., you had better..., remember to do等句型。在最後祝願對方成功的時候, 可以用簡明扼要的句型, 如wish you good luck / wish you success / may you succeed, 使文章長短句結合得當。

Dear Xiaoming,

You have told me that you are very nervous about the coming speech contest and I will try to make some suggestions which I hope can help you. In my opinion, you should get well prepared before the speech contest by practicing before a mirror. Besides, you had better use a brief and concise language in your speech so that you can leave a deep impression on the judges. When you are giving the speech, remember to keep smile and even if you forget your words, don’t be panic and just continue your speech, because no one will notice it. Wish you success in the speech! Yours,

Li Hua

例3假如你是李華,你剛收到了你的朋友王梅的電子郵件,她在郵件裏向你詢問在高中如何學好英語。請你根據下列的內容給她寫封回信。

1. 上課認真聽講,做好筆記,課後及時複習;

2. 詞彙是基礎,每天早上花半個小時的時間背誦單詞,朗讀課文;

3. 課外多與同學用英語交流,提高聽力和口語能力;

4. 每天堅持寫日記。

注意:1.詞數120—150詞左右,短文的開頭和結尾已爲你寫好,不計入總數;

2.內容可適當發揮,注意行文連貫。

Dear Wang Mei,

I’m very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I’m writing to give you some advice on how to learn English well in high school.

First of all, you should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in class so that you can go over your lessons as soon as you can/regularly after class. As is known to all=As we all know, vocabulary is of great importance / essential. You should spend half an hour in the morning reciting words and reading texts aloud. What’s more, try to communicate with your classmates in English out of class. In this way you can improve your listening and spoken English quickly. Last but not least, you should develop the habit of keeping a diary, which helps improve your written English and helps you go over/review the words and expressions that you have learnt.

I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: where there is a will, there is a way. /The man who has made up his mind to win will never say “impossible”.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

例4你是我們學校一名很熱心的學生,得知我們校要建設娛樂休閒中心,正在徵求同學們的意見,請你根據以下幾個方面的提示給校長寫一封120詞左右的建議信。

1. 娛樂休閒中心應該包括乒乓球室和羽毛球室。

2. 最好在學生的課餘時間開放。

3. 儘量不要收費。

4. ……

Dear Mr. President,

It’s come to my attention that our school is going to build a new leisure center. I’m writing to ask you to consider the following suggestions.

Firstly, I’d like to suggest that there should be a table-tennis room as well as a badminton court. I think it would do great good if you could build the center with an eye to those students who are interested in playing table-tennis or badminton. Secondly, could the center open in our spare time? If so, we will have enough time to make full use of it. Thirdly, we will be more than happy if the center is free. As we all know, not every student can afford the extra expense.

Thank you for reading my letter. I hope you will consider my suggestions. If the center is built, it will greatly enhance student life here on campus.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

倡議書

寫倡議書時,儘量使用具有鼓動性和感召力的語言,如名人名言、格言、警句、以及對偶、排比等句式,以提高語言的表達效果。例如,在倡議書的結尾使用下列句子就可起到很好的效果。

“Believe yourself and you can , manage it! Stick to it, and your dream will come true!” “Dear friends, come on! If you think you can, you can!”

“Please start from now on! You never know what you can do until you try!”

Structure:

1. Introduction 發出倡議的根據、原因和目的。

statement of the problem

how serious is the problem

summary of the proposed solution----in brief, what solution do you propose?

2. Body 所倡議的具體內容和要求。

What do you want done?

How should it be done?

What things or people are needed?

When? How much will it cost?

3. Conclusion 要表示倡議者的決心和希望

benefits—How will the proposal help the person reading the letter

a call to action—what do you want the reader to do

範文欣賞

As chairman of the Environmental Protection Committee, I have no reason different kinds of pollutions we human beings one of the serious problems. It human beings, plants and animals. to solve the problem.

(Introduction of the topic and himself/ threats / proposal)

Since we water, we should finding this problem. We may take a decade or more to improve the water quality, even though it may cost a lot of money to clean the polluted rivers.|| Secondly,

(measures / difficulties ) ’s act now to make our world a better place.

(foreseeable results/ a call)

例1由於廢氣、污水、白色垃圾等環境污染已危及到人類的健康與生存, 爲鼓勵大家節能環保,你們學校將舉辦一次“低碳行動”的環保活動, 假設你是高三(6)班的一名學生, 將要在這個活動中向全體師生髮起“低碳生活”的倡議,以下是倡議的內容:

1. 儘量綠色出行:採取步行或自行車方式; 2. 少喝一次瓶裝水;3. 儘量不用一次性製品, 如一次性木筷子和塑料袋;4. 每週至少手洗衣服一次; 5. 每週少開手機、電視一天。