雅思折線圖寫作技巧

相信很多參加過雅思考試的學員都會認爲小作文要比大作文要難寫,認爲小作文很難寫得出彩。根據多年的教學經驗,主要原因是他們的句型都過於單一。其實要想讓小作文寫得好,也並非就是一件很難的事情。今天小編就來教大家一個幫助大家提高折線圖表達的技巧。

雅思折線圖寫作技巧

在介紹技巧之前,請大家對比一下關於描述電視機觀衆人數變化的一個折線圖5.5分的.考生例文和6.5分高分範文的節選片段。

5.5分考生例文:

at 6 a.m., the proportion of TV viewers was much lower than that of radio listeners, with only 2%. After that, it increased with fluctuation and overtook that of radio listeners at 12.40, with 15%. Then it continued to ascend until it reached a peak at 45% at 8 p.m., when it started to drop, before it levelled off between 2 a.m. and 5 a.m.

6.5分高分範文:

At 6 a.m., the percentage of TV viewers was only 2%. during the next 8 hours, it showed a gradual upward trend and outnumbered the figure of radio listeners. Then, it rose continuously and peaked at 45% at 8p.m.. After there was a considerable decline until 2 a.m. in the next morning, it levelled off at 2% in the last few hours.

對比了兩篇文章之後,我們很容易發現考生例文中,整個文章句型基本上都是主謂賓句型,儘管這位學員注意到了詞彙的多樣性。而高分范文同時具備了句型和詞彙的多樣性。因此這說明了,如果想獲得6分或者以上的寫作分數,要注意詞彙和句型的豐富性。

那麼我們一共有哪些不同的句型呢?小編一共羅列了以下五種不同的句型,包括: number of TV viewers rose/increased/ascended/grew/ jumped/ climbed/ soared/ shot up/ showed upward trend number of TV viewers showed an upward trennd e was a rise/increase/growth in the figure of TV viewers ...4.a rise was seen/showed in the number of TV viewers from…to… period between 6 and 9 witnessed/experienced/saw a rise in the figure of TV viewers between… and…

我相信這五種句型都是大家所熟知的,而且大家應該都能夠正確地組織成完整的句子。所以如果能夠加以意識性地運用到我們的折線圖的創作中去,就會讓整個文章看起來豐富了很多,再結合一下同義詞的替換使用,相信一定會給大家的寫作分數加分不少。

當然,要想寫作拿高分,要注意檢查自己文章以確保整篇文章中不存在任何語法錯誤。一旦存在這些失誤,會給考官不好的印象,分數自然就上不去。