the following aspects could best illustrate the advantages of internet. netsurfers (網上衝浪者) in different countries can share interesting knowledge and the latest information. besides, internet has provided a major opportunity to buy and sell merchandise (商品). what is more, people may get medical help or even vote on internet. its advantages seem countless.
behind all this glowing talk, however, are some problems. internet makes people passive by stopping them making their own entertainment. so much so that when there is a breakdown or jam, people may find that world wide web turns into world wide wait. what is worse, some children have access to the scenes of violence and se. apart from these, it can be affected by viruses(病毒).
we should handle its problems, meanwhile we should eploit its potential as well. with proper management of internet people ought to eperience more fruits of the information revolution. all the wisdom of the ages, all the information that has enlightened mankind for centuries, should be available to us with the healthy development of internet.
核心剖析 文章開頭開門見山，段首句“the following aspects could best illustrate the advantages of internet.”緊扣提綱第一條“1．互聯網的優越性”。開篇內容直奔主題。直進式的開頭決不拐彎抹角。直截了當地表達並不排除藝術的`表達方式。(段首句的寫法具有特色。)
