【參考範文一】
The cartoon, vivid and explicit, unfolds a sense to us, in which a woman, who stands by the door, makes a cup of coffee for her husband. However, the most striking feature of the drawing is that the husband, working in front of a computer, says that he feels unfortunate to live in a world with so much misleading information. Simple as the illustration seems, it discloses a serious problem that it is rather hard to obtain useful and helpful information in the highly modernized society.
Harmful are the impacts of the phenomenon and I would like to explore the following aspects. For one thing, by no means can we deny that nothing poses a greater threat to a corporation's strategy of development than the misleading information, the harm of which can never be ignored. For another, this kind of cheat also makes it impossible for individuals, especially adolescents, to tell the right from the wrong.
From my perspective, it is high time that the authorities concerned established relevant regulations to better the environment of the virtual world. Only in this way can both people and our country benefit a lot from the development of high technology.
【參考範文二】
It is true that the internet has brought us great convenience and efficiency, however, as the data grows at an exponential rate, the severity of misleading information arises.
Deceptive news or tips travel fast online, and worse still, they may shadow our routine life or even hinder the progress of our society. Lack of enough consideration, we are easily misled by false information which always appears in bulk on the webpage. Some will alter their plans to deal with the so-called disaster but only affect their normal life; a few may even go further to violate social security and economic trend. Moreover, if the misleading news isn’t corrected soon, there may be a trust crisis between individuals and the government. For example, the nuclear leakage in Japan in 2011 has caused great panic in Eastern China, where thousands of people went out to rob salt after the rumor that salt can prevent radiation, and ended in a turbulence in the domestic market.
To prevent misleading information spreading, government should set up laws to regulate online news while individuals need to judge independently. Only when they work hand in hand will the harm of false information be diminished to the end.
點評：
題幹中明確標出同學們需要focus on the harm caused by misleading information online，所以同學們這篇文章重點就應該放在harm危害這個詞上面。
範文中，開篇以社會現象引入到主題詞misleading information誤導信息的出現;之後第二段開始重點討論誤導信息的嚴重危害。內容層層遞進，從謠言使一些人做出衝動行爲，推進到若不治理將會產生對於政府信任危機。並且段落最後用日本核輻射導致國內搶鹽事件的舉例進一步證明了謠言的危害。中間段緊扣主題。
文章結尾部分採用建議式的結尾方式，提出了針對之前提出的危害的解決措施，從政府到個人都有對應的.建議。這也更加緊扣之前第二段所提到的內容。最後一句運用押韻的手法(hand in hand對應to the end)將文章帶入收尾。最後一段的目的在於使得文章從單純的列舉誤導信息的危害加入了作者自己對這一現象的思考，也讓文章的內容更加完整。
