空巢指孩子長大離家後，父母獨自在家的空虛、寂寞的狀態。字義上，空巢就是“空寂的巢穴”，比喻小鳥離巢後的情景，現在被引申爲子女離開後家庭空寂。現有文學作品，影視作品等。社會的發展伴隨帶來人口的流動和遷徙，村縣人口奔往城鎮，小城市人奔向大城市，北上廣打工的羣體幾乎要佔據了半數的本地人口，因此空巢老人無疑成爲了這個社會的`產物。你你如何看待空巢現象?
The Phenomenon of Empty Nest
空巢老人”指那些到了退休年齡，身邊卻無子女共同生活的老人
這種現象出現的原因
如何解決由此帶來的問題
The Phenomenon of Empty Nest
Currently，an increasing number of old people live by themselves， with their children studying or working away, which is referred as the phenomenon of empty nest. According to a recent survey conducted by CCTV, the past five years has witnessed a sharp increase in
To account for this phenomenon, people have come up with vari- ous reasons listed below. To begin with，due to the fierce competition and globalization, many young people have to pursue their career in a remote place. What’s more，the improvement in economy and housing condition makes it possible for a family to have more than one apart-ment. Therefore, the young and the old live separately.
To this problem, in my mind, there are at least several approa-ches. The government and community should establish clubs to engage the attention of the elderly, encouraging the old people themselves to cultivate hobbies. In addition，the young should always bear in mind to extend their love and care to their parents. (169 詞)
範文點評
毫無疑問，第一段的大寫字母和數據能迅速抓住閱卷老師的 眼球。同時使用了 witness，sharp等好詞，以及the past five years作 主語的修辭手法，無疑增加了文章的亮點。
快捷構思
第一段:直接提出該段中心“目前,在中國的農村和城市都有 “啃老族” ”。而後，“一句話”更加形象地說明最近五 年“啃老族”的比例在增加。
第二段:模板句提出該段主題句“這種現象出現的原因”。緊 接着歹lj 出了兩種原因：pursue their career in a remote place 和 the improvement in economy and housing condi-tion makes it possible for a family to have more than one apartment 0
第三段:直接展現該段中心“如何解決由此帶來的問題”。分 別從政府和年輕人兩方面給出解決問題的辦法。
好詞佳句
1. Currently，an increasing number of old people live by themselves, with their children studying or working away, which is referred as the phenomenon of empty nest.(亮點句式,用了非限制性定語從句。)
2. fierce competition and globalization 激烈的競爭和全球化
ue one’s career 找工作(優於習慣用的 look for one’s job)
ge the attention 吸引注意力
ivate hobbies 培養興趣
in mind 牢記
