托福考試的備考，作文是不能忽略的重點。尤其是託福作文經常會與一些社會上的熱點話題聯繫在一起。因此考生在備考時，可多練習一些熱點話題的託福寫作。下面爲大家帶來一篇富人要不要捐款的2017託福寫作範文，供大家參考。
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The more money people have, the more they should give away to charity.
Ranging from purchasing sports cars, buying villa or traveling to a popular tourist resort, one can choose how to spend their money freely without pressure imposed from the outside. Even though how to spend the money one makes is at their discretion, I do think individuals should donate money to charities with increasing wealth. There are quite a few benefits for being philanthropic as are shown in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, one can be more happy if they reach out to others and be spiritually and mentally healthy. As known to all, human beings are social animals who need to bond and connect with others to survive and thrive. For example, if you have more money than you need to live a happy life, you can donate some of your wealth and fortune to other unfortunate ones. There are numerous orphanages out there who need daily necessity. Also by giving a hand to those who have lost their loved ones in accidents can make you aware of your fortune, thus you can be more confident. By reaching out to others though altruistic behaviors, one will feel the inner gratification, which can be not brought about by money. Plus, it can also allow the individual to be productive and have a sense of purpose.
Additionally, as much as philanthropic behaviors benefit others, it does offer lots of advantages to oneself, like increased social status and recognition especially for businessman and politicians. Through donating money to unlucky ones, the president of a corporation can help to build a very philanthropic image and public branding for its consumers and customers, hence they can promote their products and service by attracting more customers. On top of that, a politician who spreads love and compassion in the community can boast his or her competence as a qualified and competitive candidate for a certain political position, thus enjoy a better chance to be elected. What's more, people in the streets can also benefit themselves by giving money to other, since most of the donations are tax deductibles and they might get tax breaks in the future.
Admittedly, it is not legitimate to claim the moral high ground and point fingers to those billionaires who are stingy in reaching out to others. Nonetheless, philanthropic activities and behaviors should be applauded and embraced since even a tiny altruistic gesture can be contagious and spread positive energy to the community, which ensure a sense of belonging among community members.
In contemplation of the above analysis, I find it reasonable and rational for individuals with increased income to donate money to others since it brings better spiritual and mental health, boasts one's self-esteem and even allows the individuals to have tax breaks and most importantly, it fosters a hospitable and philanthropic atmosphere, making the community a better to live in.
附：託福寫作點撥：結構清晰、通俗易懂、直抒胸臆不拐彎抹角的開頭。
中國人的寫作特別講究含蓄美，迂迴美，但這種風格在那些黃毛外國人眼中是“狗屁不通”，甚至confusing。所以在大家寫託福作文之前，收起你們的文藝範兒，也切勿走迂迴路線以求另闢蹊徑。舉個栗子，開頭大家都知道一般的套路是引入+給出不同看法+個人觀點。有些人做法是開門見山，自然沒話說，但有些人會把精力浪費在給出個人觀點上。常常用2-3句話來陳述自己的觀點。爲了尋求句式多變和強大的.語言功底，加入了從句、例子，把好好的一句觀點句寫成了2、3行長，有時候讓我看着差點抓不到主幹---這個問題當然不會出現在一坨屎身上，但是他們會產生“羅唆”的第一印象，覺得time consuming and unnecessary.你看這不就得不償失了。
[屁股]的意見：
1)開頭引入可以稍加修飾，用排比、設問、陳述現象、或者引用、對話等，可以由淺入深，但切勿太脫離論題核心。(比如說人的幸福來源於工作，不要開頭先寫工作的類型很多=。=)
2)講大多數人的觀點。1-2句足夠，甚至可以不寫，最好一筆帶過，畢竟不是重點。不要太糾結於這句話的句式的多樣性，還是那句話，對這句話ETS不會太認真。
3)自己的觀點，儘量短、表意明確、用詞必須精準，不要拐彎抹角說到最後也沒明確表態。提示詞明顯，以便一坨屎找到你的thesis(as fas as I am concerned, as for me, from my point of view etc.)。
