2017年託福綜合寫作範文模板

導語:平時多積累綜合寫作模板,臨考前把它們都拿出來複習一遍,你的綜合寫作肯定沒問題的。

2017年託福綜合寫作範文模板

  Passage One

The government has announced that it plans to build a new university. Some people think that your community would be a good place to locate the university. Compare the advantages and disadvantages of establishing a new university in your community. Use specific details in your discussion.

託福寫作範文:

I was fortunate enough to grow up in a small town where the state university is located, and my family’s life was richer as a result of having this university in our midst. Living in a “college town” can have its disadvantages, but I would readily advocate having a new university established in my community.

One of the primary advantages of having a university situated in a community is the economic boost it would enjoy. First and foremost, the community could look forward to the creation of steady jobs, including chefs to cook in the dining room, librarians to catalog books, and gardeners to landscape the grounds. Local restaurants, movie theaters and bookstores would benefit from the spending power of young college students, and new cafes and bars might even spring up.

However, a college town finds itself enriched not just financially but in other, less tangible ways. University life consists not just of academic but of extracurricular pursuits. Professors regularly give lectures on their fields of expertise, from Dostoevsky and Russian literature to American Civil War history, and these lectures are usually open to the public, as are concerts, poetry readings and plays. Especially in a small town, international students provide glimpses into other cultures that would otherwise not be so readily available. In the town where I grew up, a large number of doctoral students came from India with their families. The daughter of one such family eventually became my best friend; her family brought me to local Indian cultural events and I grew to love the culture and now consider Indian food to be practically my native cuisine.

It would be inaccurate, though, to portray a college town as a utopia. It’s an unavoidable fact that some undergraduates consider partying to be central to the college experience, and when such students live off campus in apartments, their lifestyles are likely to cause tension among their neighbors. Longtime residents who relish their communities as peaceful, family-oriented places to live are naturally disturbed when a group of students rent the house next door and create an atmosphere of drinking, parties and loud music at odd hours. There is no easy solution, but communication between the university administration and the community is an essential part of the planning process before the university is established.

When a university is established, it becomes inextricably connected to the community where it is located. Alumni who return, years later, for reunions might have some of their fondest memories away from campus, for example in the coffee shop where they spent hours studying, or at the ice cream shop that was a Friday night destination. Planning and discussion between the administration and the community will always be necessary to reduce conflict, but if given the opportunity to welcome a new university to my community, I would be more than enthusiastic about the prospect.

  Passage Two

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

It is more important for government to build new housing than preserve old and historical building.

Step 1: 主題句

Value類:Topic(題目中所描述行動)能帶來XXX

Fact類: XXX導致了Topic(題目中所闡述的現象)

Step 2: 對主題句進行解釋拓展

(1)爲什麼會這樣?

(2)這樣做能帶來什麼?

Step 3: 通過對比進一步說明

如果是A和B兩種事物比較,假設選擇A,在描述A好的時候,可以闡述B的不好。

如果只有一種事物,可以先說該事物怎麼樣,再說如果沒有該事物又會怎樣。

Step 4: 例子

將上面的論述具體到一個人或一件事情上。

Step 5: 小結

對例子進行小結,呼應主題句。

舉個例子來說,題目中問到底是住在鄉村好,還是住在城市好,我們選擇住在鄉村好,我們的一個主題句就可以寫成:

In the first place, living in the country contributes to our health.

接下來我們需要解釋爲什麼住在鄉村會有益於健康,我們可以這樣解釋:

As is known to all, in the country there are few industrial plants and vehicles so that fewer pollutants are emitted into the water and air. As a result, we can enjoy the blue sky, clean water, fresh air and healthy food, which contribute to our health.

然後我們可以講城市生活與鄉村生活進行對比,完成第三步驟:

By contrast, people living in the city are suffering from various diseases caused by the environmental contamination, for pollutants from factories and automobiles are continually being discharged into the air and rivers.

接着我們通過一個具體的'例子去把問題闡述地更加清晰:

For example, my grandparents have been living in the countryside for over fifty years and seldom do they go to hospital. Last month, they came to the city I live in, and the next week they both fell ill. They were sent to the hospital and the doctor said that it was because of smog. The doctor suggested that my grandparents should live in the hospital for some time, but they refused. They decided to go back to the village. It was amazing that a few days after they went back, both of them recovered.

最後我們只需要簡單地對例子進行小結,呼應主題句就可以了:

Thanks to the good environment in the countryside, my grandparents can enjoy a healthy life.

將上面的內容連接起來,就形成了一個完整的重點段落:

In the first place, living in the country contributes to our health. As is known to all, in the country there are few industrial plants and vehicles so that fewer pollutants are emitted into the water and air. As a result, we can enjoy the blue sky, clean water, fresh air and healthy food, which contributes to our health. By contrast, people living in the city are suffering from various diseases caused by the environmental contamination, for pollutants from factories and automobiles are continually being discharged into the air and rivers. For example, my grandparents have been living in the countryside for over fifty years and seldom do they go to hospital. Last month, they came to the city I live in, and the next week they both fell ill. They were sent to the hospital and the doctor said that it was because of smog. The doctor suggested that my grandparents should live in the hospital for some time, but they refused. They decided to go back to the village. It was amazing that a few days after they went back, both of them recovered. Thanks to the good environment in the countryside, my grandparents can enjoy a healthy life.