2013年12月21日雅思寫作Task2真題解析附範文

 2013年12月21日雅思寫作Task2真題解析附範文

2013年12月21日雅思寫作Task2真題解析附範文

寫作題目

Scientists advise people to lead a healthy lifestyle, but millions of people still continue with unhealthy activities.

Why and what can we do to change this situation?

題目講解:

題型類別:報告類(起因、影響及措施)

題材類別:社會類話題(生活方式)

考情分析及2014年1月份展望:

繼12月14號涉及原因分析的寫作話題之後,本場考試依然爲報告類題型。針對 即將到來的.1月份考試,建議大家重點熟悉議論類和報告類文章寫作框架和構思 方法,多練習不同話題的語言素材,做到考場上靈活應對。

與本場考試話題類似的舊題有:

Some people think it is the respoasibility for government to ensure that people have healthy lifestyles. Others think people should have a free for their own lifestyles decisions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. ( 2008.03.29)

參考思路(針對不同人羣有不健康生淸方式進行分析)》

不健康生活方式的原因:

1.媒體過度渲染以瘦爲美的觀念導致女性飲食紊亂,比如盲目節食;

2.工作量的增大使上班族長期久坐,沒有閒暇時間參與體育鍛鍊;

3-科技進步使人們與電腦如膠似漆,尤其是年輕人,很容易沉迷網絡遊戲

解決措施:

1.媒體報道應該被審查;媒體應倡導健康的生活方式;

2.政府和企業建立合作關係,加大對公共運動設施的投入,讓人們更多參與體育運動的機會。

參考範文:

As public health declines alarmingly, the significance of making smarter and wiser decisions lias been increasingly recognized. Although leading a healthy lifestyle becomes a valued concept, multitudes of people stick with their unhealthy choices. Therefore,possible contributory causes of this pressing phenomenon and corresponding measures will be explored and put forward.

Admittedly, getting nd of unhealthy habits is far from effortless. First and foremost, the mass media overexposes the public to portrayals of “ideal” body types and is a real culprit. To be specific, fashions magazines, TV programmes and advertisements tend to glorify a slender body shape of females, thus exaggerating the importance of appearances in general. It is therefore not uncommon that many vulnerable school-age girls, influenced by diet products campaigns, are afflicted with eating disorders. Secondly, an increased workload should also be held accountable. In this regard, due to a hectic work schedule, many white-collar workers have to lead a sedentary lifestyle, being deprived of their spare time to go the gytn regularly. Consequently, m order to save time and energy, these people are more likely to rely on fast food, wdiich contains considerable amount of sugar and fat. Last but not least, technological innovations have also distracted people from engagement in harmless relaxations and keep them glued to computer screens. For instance, many youngsters get easily indulged in online games and could probably fall victim to game addiction, which may,in a long tenn, lead to diminishing academic performance and social isolation.

In the face of undesirable impacts brought by an unhealthy lifestyle, remedies are needed for individuals and society as a whole. For one thing, appropriate media censorship could be implemented. Various media are advised to campaign for a healthy lifestyle and encourage people from all walks of life to participate m outdoor activities. For another, partnership can be established between the government and enterprises and a joint effort can be flirther made to increase the number of public sports facilities, offering residents m both rural and urban areas more opportunities to get involved in regular exercise.

In brief based on the aforementioned analysis, the media coverage, a heavy workload, and enticing technological advancements are to be blamed for this disturbing phenomenon. Nevertheless, there are potentially effective measures to alleviate their adverse impacts.