2018專四寫作範文《預防校園火災》

火災是現代危害人們生命與財產安全的主要災害,現在尤其是校園火災更爲引人關注。下面,小編爲大家送上一篇相關的2018專四寫作範文。

2018專四寫作範文《預防校園火災》

 Fire Prevention on Campus

People are alarmed by the succession of campus fires in recent years. In each of these accidents,heavy casualties were reported houses were burned down,students lost their lives,and properties were damaged. Faced with such a chilling fact,people keep asking,“What on earth results in these repeated tragedies?”

A brief survey of them reveals that human factors still prove to be the leading example,three of these fires were caused by the students’ use of electric students often leave the heaters unattended, the risks are rather high should the water in the bottle boil dry while no one is around to turn off the other cases,fires were also caused by stoves,candles,cigarette butts,etc.

Since most of these disasters could have been prevented if proper precautions had been taken,students should be better educated on the importance and measures of fire following three reminders are of particular importance for us students: First,learn how to use a fire extinguisher. Second,double-check candles,heaters,stoves and other electric appliances,and make sure there are no open flames before leaving ly,do not smoke in the dorm.

  附:專四寫作技巧

1、注重寫好文章的框架

我曾經問過我的外教老師,外國人看文章最注重的是什麼,他告訴我說是文章的framework.即一篇文章好不好,首先看的不是他的句型詞彙,或是論點等。而是段落之間的銜接一定要十分清楚,我們不能老是採用大三段的形式-開頭,經過,結尾。我們可以多用用連接詞,例如:first of all, moreover, secondly, lastly等,另外可以多分自然段,給考官一目瞭然的感覺。還有我們可以多看看國外的文章,看看他們的寫作模式,我當初寫文章的時候,用的就是我看到一篇國外文章的模式,我覺得可以套用,我最後介紹給大家。

2、句型的多樣化

如果一篇文章,從頭到尾,永遠用的只有一種句型,那麼這篇文章一定拿不到高分,我們可以適當的改換一下句型,我給大家一定建議,希望給大家有點幫助。

3、基本句型包括

Ⅰ.主謂句;Ⅱ. There be;Ⅲ.主系表結構的句子;Ⅳ.被動語態(我看到一張帖字說,不要用被動,我不這樣認爲,國外的文章,用被動的.也比比皆是。

4、複雜句型

包括Ⅰ.並列句;Ⅱ.從句(定語,狀語,名詞性,非謂語)

5.詞彙的Variety

說實話做到這點真的很難,首先你要有龐大的詞彙量,第二你要用的恰當,不出錯誤。我自認做不到這點,所以我用的詞彙有時候會重複。當然大家可以累計一些固定搭配的詞彙,例如:激烈的競爭fierce competition等